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PostSubject: Poems one, Poems all!   Wed Oct 21, 2009 1:01 pm

Roses are red,
Violets are blue,
Bring all your poems,
Or I'll crush you!






Post any poetry here. doesn't matter if it's bad, the point is to try to improve and get applauded for your work. Very Happy

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PostSubject: Re: Poems one, Poems all!   Wed Oct 21, 2009 1:04 pm

Come sleep sweet slumber an' shroud me in thy purple cloak How is that?
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PostSubject: Re: Poems one, Poems all!   Wed Oct 21, 2009 1:07 pm

A little short, lol.
But good imagery.

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PostSubject: Re: Poems one, Poems all!   Wed Oct 21, 2009 1:09 pm

How is this?

There will come soft rains and the smell of the ground,
And swallows circling with their shimmering sound;

And frogs in the pool singing at night,
And wild plum trees in tremulous white;

Robins will wear their feathery fire,
Whistling their whims on a low fence-wire;

And not one will know of the war, not one
Will care at last when it is done.

Not one would mind, neither bird nor tree,
If mankind perished utterly;

And Spring herself when she woke at dawn
Would scarcely know that we were gone.
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PostSubject: Re: Poems one, Poems all!   Wed Oct 21, 2009 1:10 pm

Shocked

Wonderful! Very nice. Very Happy
Who can beat that, then?

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PostSubject: Re: Poems one, Poems all!   Fri Oct 23, 2009 12:46 pm

Won't beat it,but I felt like it...

The moon rose,and shone through the sky,
All who were alive stood to fight or laid to die,
A howl arose,the ground shook,
Towards the town a mist drifted,
For today is the Hallow March,
And so it shall be 'till the curse is lifted.

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PostSubject: Re: Poems one, Poems all!   Sat Oct 24, 2009 7:39 am

GM, Your poem is better than my own. Yours is exellent. Mine is not.
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PostSubject: Re: Poems one, Poems all!   Wed Nov 18, 2009 2:50 pm

I love poetry, who doesnt? It is nice and calming (most of the time. Things with romance makes me go and explode) Who else likes poetry? It is art of words. Absolutly beautiful.
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PostSubject: Re: Poems one, Poems all!   Wed Nov 18, 2009 3:00 pm

i like poetry quite a lot, not tha great but love reading and simply hearing it
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PostSubject: Re: Poems one, Poems all!   Wed Nov 18, 2009 3:13 pm

What do you think of my small poem then?
I think it is rather good but that is my oppinion. I do prefer writing stories. Much better at that. You try making a poem.
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PostSubject: Re: Poems one, Poems all!   Wed Nov 18, 2009 3:32 pm

sounds good to me Smile

here's mine, keep in mind i havnt write one within 2 - 3 years Neutral

Idle visions of ones mind,
suger coat the truth of disclosure.
The poisoned mind leaks to remind,
of distant lonely indviduals to exposure.

Lend me a couple of hands,
for I am two as one.
Fueling my needs I command,
in anger I soon will perish and be gone.

Distortion illuminates only to the individual of solitarity,
assistance vague it is.
A seperate transformation to fairy,
your end is near and that is bliss.

It is talking about a drunk guy on the floor, wanting help yet he has had too much acohol and is begining to pass out. Near his end, his visions get blurry and his imagination takes over seeing andother person as a fairy.
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PostSubject: Re: Poems one, Poems all!   Thu Nov 19, 2009 9:03 am

Sounds pretty cool. I thought it was about fire for some reason. I am much better at writing stories. Much better, I think I am best at horror stories. That was good poem.
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PostSubject: Re: Poems one, Poems all!   Thu Nov 19, 2009 9:24 am

thank you Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: Poems one, Poems all!   Wed Dec 02, 2009 12:07 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Poems one, Poems all!   Wed Dec 02, 2009 2:23 pm

My life is meaningless without motivation,
A pointless journey that never ends.
I am part of nature's nation,
A neverending love I shall tend.

Animal gods are what I adore,
the very essence of my soul it be.
Never have I felt such love before,
the love that nature bestows on me.

But let not my calm fool your eyes,
I am a tempest of evil and rage.
As animals die, so my soul too dies,
My fury only accelerates with age.

As my natural neighbours face their final days,
My heart and mind turn to everlasting ice.
to dare to calm my destructive ways,
Will you really dare to roll life's dice?

My soul cries for my animal kin,
yet none of me cares about you.
You humans thought that you would win,
and civilise me like the others do.

Yet your attempts have fallen on deaf ears,
Humanity can burn and die for all I care.
Your attacks on my love has left my heart seared,
So try to socilise me now, if you dare....
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PostSubject: Re: Poems one, Poems all!   Wed Dec 02, 2009 2:35 pm

Hmm, very good. I suppose it is great, alot better than mine. (Which I actually picked up sub-consiosly as it seems) Very good try making it rhyme. You have a great talent at writing. I on the other hand, have not. Once again, very good. You ever try limmerics?
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PostSubject: Re: Poems one, Poems all!   Wed Dec 02, 2009 2:40 pm

Not really no, they aren't really my thing Sad

Glad you like the poem though, It's from my very heart and soul.
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PostSubject: Re: Poems one, Poems all!   Wed Dec 02, 2009 3:46 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Poems one, Poems all!   Fri Dec 04, 2009 9:06 am

I suppose I could think of something... Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Poems one, Poems all!   Fri Dec 04, 2009 9:31 am

Write about Tecklylash
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PostSubject: Re: Poems one, Poems all!   Sat Dec 19, 2009 1:59 pm

Roses are red
Violets is blue
I love Tecklylash
And so should you!

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Labour is red
National is blue
Republicans suck
And so do you! Razz
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PostSubject: Re: Poems one, Poems all!   Thu Dec 31, 2009 10:53 am

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I love Tecklylash

me to! Very Happy lol

and oh yeah didnt notice you posted tis back then, Razz

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PostSubject: Re: Poems one, Poems all!   Thu Dec 31, 2009 4:21 pm

...and that is relevant how?

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PostSubject: Re: Poems one, Poems all!   Fri Jan 01, 2010 6:57 am

because he did a poem
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PostSubject: Re: Poems one, Poems all!   Mon Jan 18, 2010 12:34 pm

A poem that I like. It is NOT written by me by the way:
THE CHARGE OF THE LIGHT BRIGADE

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