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PostSubject: Re: Chat thread   Mon Feb 22, 2010 4:12 pm

Your works are fantastic as is, but I have a few ways in which you can make your stories even better.

'Fluffy' Writing- Okay, not everyone likes this, but it is the hallmark of any legendary writer. Give out good, powerful adjectives and let your story take an entirely new form! You have no idea how brilliant this technique is until you utilise it! Advanced english word usage can make or break a story, use it well.

Inspiration- Anyone who loves to write probably also loves to read. Take inspiration from books or, and I say the next one grudgingly, films. Taking inspiration and expanding on it can only help to better your writing skills. Now, take my advice...do not use experience from films. Books are much clearer, Films are harder to translate from image to text. If you want to be successful, I mean, really hit it off with all your readers, you will get inspiration from a book. They are generally structured better.

Think before you write- I know, it sounds stupid, but you won't believe how many people don't plan out their stories. PLAN! XD The more you plan the storyline, the better the flow. You know what to write, how to improve, and so on. Don't just barrel into writing a novel without a clue of what your storyline is to be. It must be sensible, so plan it sensibly.

Keeping Calm- If you run out of things to write, don't panic! If your mind has a mental block, read your story from the beginning, and see how you can continue. Read it slowly, read it carefully, allow yourself to see every word for what it is. You'll soon find that you have many different paths to take, each one as exciting as the other!

These are four main points, I hope they help.
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PostSubject: Re: Chat thread   Tue Feb 23, 2010 9:02 am

Ah thank you. I have allready planned another story. I call it Bloodsport. It will be set in the same world as Werewolves!

As soon as I finish Werewolves! I will do Bloodsport. (Or should I call it Blood Court? Hmm...)
Meh, if you want back ground on the setting, just give me a yell

Oh and thanks for advice.

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PostSubject: Re: Chat thread   Tue Feb 23, 2010 11:39 pm

I am agreeing with Salv's advice. Thats why the Twilight saga was so crappy,because it was written by a morman with 5 kids,no time for planning.


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PostSubject: Re: Chat thread   Wed Feb 24, 2010 9:31 am

A... morman?
What the hell is one of those? (We don't have them in My town)
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PostSubject: Re: Chat thread   Wed Feb 24, 2010 10:25 am

A morman is somebody who takes several wives.

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PostSubject: Re: Chat thread   Wed Feb 24, 2010 11:05 am

aah. Bigamist. (that is what it's called is it not?)
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PostSubject: Re: Chat thread   Wed Feb 24, 2010 11:07 am

Well Polygomy I think is the correct erm, Bigomy is going out with two people at once, mormans often go out with several, a dozen, or even more then 20 in some cases.

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PostSubject: Re: Chat thread   Wed Feb 24, 2010 1:21 pm

Well... This place is fun... No Rping, i only come back to write a couple of paragraphs in my story... (sigh) this place needs to see Sanguine... Or Sheogorath. Both are good...
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PostSubject: Re: Chat thread   Wed Feb 24, 2010 1:24 pm

What? Who are Sanguine and Sheogorath? And If people would bloody post We'd have Rping.

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PostSubject: Re: Chat thread   Wed Feb 24, 2010 1:27 pm

Sanguine. God of pleasure. Sheogorath, God of Madness.
I favour both. If ye wish to pray to Sanguine... Have flop.
Sheogorath... he is little harder...
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PostSubject: Re: Chat thread   Wed Feb 24, 2010 3:00 pm

Except Twilight was written by a woman;;;

But I agree, I hate Twilight, though I don't think it's to do with a lack of planning. Commercially, it's a huge success because Bella is the blank, boring board every teenage girl can pretend to be. Her lack of personality makes it easier to inject yours.

But yeah.

It's poo.

Harry Potter for the win xD
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PostSubject: Re: Chat thread   Wed Feb 24, 2010 11:45 pm

Lol, Twilight FAILS.

Incidentally, noticing your posts on loG, Hyouri, to emphasize a word instead of doing /this/ put [i][./i] the word in between those, without the full stop, It's italics.

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PostSubject: Re: Chat thread   Thu Feb 25, 2010 12:09 am

Hyouri wrote:
Except Twilight was written by a woman;;;

But I agree, I hate Twilight, though I don't think it's to do with a lack of planning. Commercially, it's a huge success because Bella is the blank, boring board every teenage girl can pretend to be. Her lack of personality makes it easier to inject yours.

But yeah.

It's poo.

Harry Potter for the win xD


I agree completely. Very Happy

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PostSubject: Re: Chat thread   Thu Feb 25, 2010 12:13 am

XD
Zig has more than twice as many posts as me.
Show's who posts more out of the admins Razz

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PostSubject: Re: Chat thread   Thu Feb 25, 2010 12:14 am

lol


The chatbox seems to be permanently empty,People should chat more. Sad
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PostSubject: Re: Chat thread   Thu Feb 25, 2010 3:21 am

HEY people, back from my London trip Very Happy so whats been going on
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PostSubject: Re: Chat thread   Thu Feb 25, 2010 10:40 am

nothing much. On DAC quite a lot though.
And TWILATE FAILS SO MUCH!
Harry potter is much better as many of you said.
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PostSubject: Re: Chat thread   Thu Feb 25, 2010 11:15 am

ahh lol, I like HP better than Twilight but never watched Tqilight before - I hear the book are far better
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PostSubject: Re: Chat thread   Thu Feb 25, 2010 12:36 pm

I go on the chatbox when other people are on, but people tend not to join.

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PostSubject: Re: Chat thread   Thu Feb 25, 2010 12:51 pm

Zigzagas wants proof that I am indeed who I say I am and that I know Bandon.
He has a pet Wolf called Ajunta Pall and a Jack russel called Sunshine. His favourite Star Wars character is Juhani. His family is feuding with another family named Fenn.
His first name was Gius before he had it changed. He has many nightmares and his last girlfriend was a russian named Anzhela. (I cannot spell it right. Forgive me)

If you need any more proof, I am happy to provide
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PostSubject: Re: Chat thread   Thu Feb 25, 2010 1:33 pm

It's sufficient.

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PostSubject: Re: Chat thread   Thu Feb 25, 2010 1:53 pm

lol well im not bothered either way, but you do realise that this could be Bandon speaking giving all the answers. but I doubt it as why would he go through such a silly ordeal Laughing
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PostSubject: Re: Chat thread   Thu Feb 25, 2010 1:54 pm

Yes, I considered that as well. If it, then it's of little consequence.

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PostSubject: Re: Chat thread   Thu Feb 25, 2010 1:58 pm

hey, I sent a few ppl friend request a long time ago and havnt replied Sad
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PostSubject: Re: Chat thread   Thu Feb 25, 2010 1:59 pm

I didn't know. I never know when I get one.

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